The 5 senses
Where I’m from (BY PITA)
I grew up in Pilkington road.
Where I’m from it smells like fresh air
Where I’m from tastes like butter chicken from my moms cooking.
Where I’m from sounds like a whole bunch of people driving by and playing their musics.
Where I’m from looks like hard people working on the other side of my house.
Where I’m from feels I feel loved from my family.
Where my parents are from.
My Dad grew up in Tonga and my Mom grew up in NZ
Where I’m from the roosters crow early in the morning.
Where I’m from we hear church bells rings every day for different church programs.
Where I’m from adults are talking and laughing while kids play .
Where I’m from we like to go to the beach.
Thank you.
Malo Pita!
ReplyDeleteWow, what an awesome poem. You really tried to match (or better) my example and I am impressed with your effort. You've got ideas specific to your experiences and upbringing in both Tonga and NZ (i.e. Pilkington Road, Tonga, roosters, music, church bells, people working).
Agree with James, you really tried to capture the senses.
Agree with Zara, avoid underlining so people don't think it's a link.
Well done, Pita.
Mr N
Thank you i've been to tonga when I was just born I stayed there for five years but when i turned five that's when my mum and dad came from NZ to get me away from there because that's when I started swearing and lying so when I arrived to NZ my cousin was the first one to teach me english the first word I said was (Be a man) that was the only word I could say well thank you for having a moment to stop by and chek out my blog THANK YOU
ReplyDelete